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Some feel that students should not have to take standardized tests in school.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is really important for each nation, the develop nation always need a good education system. Therefore, they've created a lot of exams for student aim to check student's abillity and searching for talents, the peolple who will be useful to make their nation stronger.
in another aspect, there are a lot of tests not really rate all of factors on students because students not just have knowledge about academy. Many students have talents about other things like sport, art or instrument. The problem is so many people judge students based on their exam score. This cause the discomfort on them so many people, so that they feel students should not have to take standardized tests in school.
But, at least students must pass the standardized in school because you can't live a life without basic neccesary knowledge. in conclusion,I completely agree with that students have to take standardized tests in school

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