Your essay partially addresses the task but lacks development and structure. To improve, ensure you fully address both sides of the argument, use a wider range of vocabulary, and pay close attention to grammar and sentence structure. Consider expanding your essay to include more detailed reasoning and examples to support your opinion.
Your essay partially addresses the task but lacks development and structure. To improve, ensure you fully address both sides of the argument, use a wider range of vocabulary, and pay close attention to grammar and sentence structure. Consider expanding your essay to include more detailed reasoning and examples to support your opinion.
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