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You have answered the question effectively by explaining how the salaries of CEOs and executives are important to a company. However, you do not fully extend or support your main ideas, and some of your supporting ideas are over-generalized. You need to provide examples or further explanation for your main ideas. Make sure that your supporting ideas are not over-generalized. You should also try to include examples, as this will help to clarify your points and make your essay more convincing. Your body paragraphs must be focused on the question of CEO salaries. The vocabulary is good overall, but some word choice errors in this essay. The grammar is a little bit better than IELTS 7.0, but not yet a strong IELTS 8.0, as you have some complex grammar errors. You need to focus on accurate use of complex grammar structures and natural use of the language.

Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The payment of salary is an essential part of the compensation of the works one is doing for an enterprise. I would say this is one of the pillars of how a company can secure a steady growth towards its well defined objectives.

There must be a balance, between the amount of responsibility one is taking in the company and how they get rewarded for their share of efforts they put in the process. Although it might not always be the case that the higher payment would be an absolute element which contributes to the performance of the company, but altogether it will pay a vital role to ensure that making proper decisions, putting enough time and energy and having higher qualifications are known factors as how a company can expect to foster and shine in ever-continuing rivalry in the market.

Studies show that among several other important pieces of puzzle of success, paying decent to people of high rank within a corporation would play a key role in achieving targets of the company and more obviously will create the opportunity to allow the company to have better possibilities in diversification, in the products and in the markets.

So, without being illogical, and by maintaining the key principles of the company, and by observing this very fact that without having a happy Human Resource no mid and long term success could be obtained, I strongly support the idea of proper payment to key people of the corporation.

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You have answered the question effectively by explaining how the salaries of CEOs and executives are important to a company. However, you do not fully extend or support your main ideas, and some of your supporting ideas are over-generalized. You need to provide examples or further explanation for your main ideas. Make sure that your supporting ideas are not over-generalized. You should also try to include examples, as this will help to clarify your points and make your essay more convincing. Your body paragraphs must be focused on the question of CEO salaries. The vocabulary is good overall, but some word choice errors in this essay. The grammar is a little bit better than IELTS 7.0, but not yet a strong IELTS 8.0, as you have some complex grammar errors. You need to focus on accurate use of complex grammar structures and natural use of the language.

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